Tweak and reword release notes

2021-05-12 09:09:43 +02:00
parent ebe83bed9c
commit 3736bc9604
1 changed files with 6 additions and 5 deletions
@@ -55,14 +55,14 @@
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      <listitem>
        <para>
-          Reduce the supported maximum number of iterations that can be
-          configured in an NSEC3 zones to 150. [GL #2642]
+          The maximum supported number of NSEC3 iterations that can be
+          configured for a zone has been reduced to 150. [GL #2642]
        </para>
      </listitem>
      <listitem>
        <para>
-	  Treat DNSSEC responses with NSEC3 iterations greater than 150 as
-	  insecure. [GL #2445]
+          DNSSEC responses containing NSEC3 records with iteration counts
+          greater than 150 are now treated as insecure. [GL #2445]
        </para>
      </listitem>
    </itemizedlist>
@@ -72,7 +72,8 @@
    <itemizedlist>
      <listitem>
        <para>
-          Update ZONEMD to match RFC 8976. [GL #2658]
+          The implementation of the ZONEMD RR type has been updated to match RFC
+          8976. [GL #2658]
        </para>
      </listitem>
    </itemizedlist>