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Apply the same editorial pass used on the StaffML paper:
- Pass 1 (US English): paper was already clean.
- Pass 2 (em-dashes): replace seven stylistic "---" in body text with
commas or parentheses; keep the "no dedicated wall" cell dash.
- Pass 3 (colon-elaborations): rewrite ~30 instances of the StaffML
"X: Y" pattern as separate sentences or commas, especially in the
R3 case-study walkthrough and the Fallacies section.
- Pass 4 (section previews): expand the openers of Architecture,
Taxonomy, 3-Tier Resolver Architecture, and Validation so each
multi-subsection section previews its subsections in prose.
- Pass 5 (footnote audit): inline the two terminology footnotes
about "node" and "single accelerator" into the body; keep the LP
and Mars Climate Orbiter substantive asides.
- Pass 8 (figure narrative): add a body reference and reading hint
for fig:solver-chaining, which previously had no in-text mention.
- Pass 9 (build hygiene): adopt the interviews/paper FORCE pattern
so figures/%.pdf is always regenerated from its SVG source, not
shadowed by a stale committed PDF; add make layout-review.
- Pass 11 (bibliography): drop a "Best Paper Award" note flag and
move an arXiv ID from a free-form note into a proper eprint field.
- Pass 13 (roadmap): rewrite the end-of-introduction roadmap so it
names every \section in order, including Architecture and
Conclusion (previously only their subsections were listed).
- Layout: wrap fig:carbon in \afterpage{...} so it lands on a fresh
page instead of being crammed into the same column as fig:roofline.
Page count: 28 -> 29.
