[GH-ISSUE #589] Chapter 1, PDF format #1501

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Originally created by @marcozennaro on GitHub (Jan 7, 2025).
Original GitHub issue: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/589

  • I am not sure all the section on SocratiQ is needed. Is it possible to just include some of the chapter in the PDF? The figures are sometimes too large (0.2, for example, or 0.4, 0.13) or too small (0.3). The section called Data Storage is cut.
  • Is it possible to add a reference to papers such as the one in Figure 1.2? I think that would be great.
  • In 1..2.1 the figure it cut as it is between two pages. Figure 1.3 is difficult to read and would require a whole page. Would it be possible to put the text underneath the figure?
  • in 1.2.4, practical machine --> practical machine learning
  • in 1.2.5, is it worth adding the youtube video link?
  • in 1.3, traced- has a short hyphen while revolution has a long one :-)
  • Figure 1.6 is not readable. Probably putting the text under the figure would give it more horizontal space.
  • should TinyML become tinyML in 1.6 and in the rest of the book?
  • in 1.7.1 technical debt is used few times.
  • in 1.8.1 a link to FarmBeats would be great, as in 1.8.2 for AlphaFold and in 1.8.3 for Waymo. The youtube link for Waymo could probably be removed.
Originally created by @marcozennaro on GitHub (Jan 7, 2025). Original GitHub issue: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/589 - I am not sure all the section on SocratiQ is needed. Is it possible to just include some of the chapter in the PDF? The figures are sometimes too large (0.2, for example, or 0.4, 0.13) or too small (0.3). The section called Data Storage is cut. - Is it possible to add a reference to papers such as the one in Figure 1.2? I think that would be great. - In 1..2.1 the figure it cut as it is between two pages. Figure 1.3 is difficult to read and would require a whole page. Would it be possible to put the text underneath the figure? - in 1.2.4, practical machine --> practical machine learning - in 1.2.5, is it worth adding the youtube video link? - in 1.3, traced- has a short hyphen while revolution has a long one :-) - Figure 1.6 is not readable. Probably putting the text under the figure would give it more horizontal space. - should TinyML become tinyML in 1.6 and in the rest of the book? - in 1.7.1 technical debt is used few times. - in 1.8.1 a link to FarmBeats would be great, as in 1.8.2 for AlphaFold and in 1.8.3 for Waymo. The youtube link for Waymo could probably be removed.
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@profvjreddi commented on GitHub (Jan 7, 2025):

  • I am not sure all the section on SocratiQ is needed. Is it possible to just include some of the chapter in the PDF? The figures are sometimes too large (0.2, for example, or 0.4, 0.13) or too small (0.3). The section called Data Storage is cut.
  • Is it possible to add a reference to papers such as the one in Figure 1.2? I think that would be great.
  • In 1..2.1 the figure it cut as it is between two pages. Figure 1.3 is difficult to read and would require a whole page. Would it be possible to put the text underneath the figure?

I agree. The pictures are a real pain. I have hired someone to help me with the PDF rendering, so hopefully, these issues will be resolved in the coming few months, with the first draft expected at the end of the month.

  • in 1.2.4, practical machine --> practical machine learning

Fixed.

  • in 1.2.5, is it worth adding the youtube video link?

Not following this one. Could you see which section this is again here and please tell me: latest version

  • in 1.3, traced- has a short hyphen while revolution has a long one :-)

Fixed 👍

  • Figure 1.6 is not readable. Probably putting the text under the figure would give it more horizontal space.

I had made a mistake in the PDF that I had pushed a couple of days ago by setting the resolution very low. I have since updated it.

  • should TinyML become tinyML in 1.6 and in the rest of the book?

Yes, there is a rather big pending pass that I have to make on this fix as you can see here: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/414

Especially now that we're trying to teach ML systems more broadly, it is even more important to clear this up. I will reserve this for a future fix.

  • in 1.7.1 technical debt is used few times.

Thanks for catching this. I reworked the paragraphs and improved the flow.

  • in 1.8.1 a link to FarmBeats would be great, as in 1.8.2 for AlphaFold and in 1.8.3 for Waymo. The youtube link for Waymo could probably be removed.

Done!

I know we are far from perfect but please keep this feedback coming because that's what helps us get to that ultimate finish line someday. Appreciate you taking the time to jot your feedback here. 🙏

<!-- gh-comment-id:2576276461 --> @profvjreddi commented on GitHub (Jan 7, 2025): > * I am not sure all the section on SocratiQ is needed. Is it possible to just include some of the chapter in the PDF? The figures are sometimes too large (0.2, for example, or 0.4, 0.13) or too small (0.3). The section called Data Storage is cut. > * Is it possible to add a reference to papers such as the one in Figure 1.2? I think that would be great. > * In 1..2.1 the figure it cut as it is between two pages. Figure 1.3 is difficult to read and would require a whole page. Would it be possible to put the text underneath the figure? I agree. The pictures are a real pain. I have hired someone to help me with the PDF rendering, so hopefully, these issues will be resolved in the coming few months, with the first draft expected at the end of the month. > * in 1.2.4, practical machine --> practical machine learning Fixed. > * in 1.2.5, is it worth adding the youtube video link? Not following this one. Could you see which section this is again here and please tell me: [latest version](https://mlsysbook.ai) > * in 1.3, traced- has a short hyphen while revolution has a long one :-) Fixed 👍 > * Figure 1.6 is not readable. Probably putting the text under the figure would give it more horizontal space. I had made a mistake in the PDF that I had pushed a couple of days ago by setting the resolution very low. I have since updated it. > * should TinyML become tinyML in 1.6 and in the rest of the book? Yes, there is a rather big pending pass that I have to make on this fix as you can see here: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/414 Especially now that we're trying to teach ML systems more broadly, it is even more important to clear this up. I will reserve this for a future fix. > * in 1.7.1 technical debt is used few times. Thanks for catching this. I reworked the paragraphs and improved the flow. > * in 1.8.1 a link to FarmBeats would be great, as in 1.8.2 for AlphaFold and in 1.8.3 for Waymo. The youtube link for Waymo could probably be removed. Done! I know we are far from perfect but please keep this feedback coming because that's what helps us get to that ultimate finish line someday. Appreciate you taking the time to jot your feedback here. 🙏
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