github-starred/cs249r_book
2
0
Fork 0
mirror of https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book.git synced 2026-05-06 17:49:07 -05:00
Code Issues 85 Packages Projects Releases 24 Wiki Activity

[GH-ISSUE #563] Some points in ml_systems and dl_primer. #1491

New Issue
Closed
opened 2026-04-11 07:51:39 -05:00 by GiteaMirror · 1 comment
GiteaMirror commented 2026-04-11 07:51:39 -05:00
Owner
Copy Link

Originally created by @BravoBaldo on GitHub (Dec 28, 2024).
Original GitHub issue: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/563

In contents/core/ml_systems/ml_systems.qmd
"...illustrate how ML paradigms—Cloud, Edge, Mobile, and Tiny ML—interact..." --> "...Cloud, Edge, Mobile, and Tiny—interact..." (remove second "ML"

In contents/core/dl_primer/dl_primer.qmd

  • Search "These three factors" the sentence is repeated.
  • Search "A bias vector": "...for each layer lf" (Is the final 'f' correct?)
  • Search "Input Layer Processing" probably should be bold and end with a colon.
    The same goes for the next two points in the list.
  • Search "approximately 1,875": why "approximately"? the calculation is exact!
  • Search "in the layer above it." in the text the layers are represented with a horizontal trend from left to right. "above" is strange, I suggest the "previous".
  • Search "Figure 3.17." remove last dot
Originally created by @BravoBaldo on GitHub (Dec 28, 2024). Original GitHub issue: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/563 In `contents/core/ml_systems/ml_systems.qmd` "...illustrate how ML paradigms—Cloud, Edge, Mobile, and Tiny ML—interact..." --> "...Cloud, Edge, Mobile, and Tiny—interact..." (remove second "ML" In `contents/core/dl_primer/dl_primer.qmd` - Search "These three factors" the sentence is repeated. - Search "A bias vector": "...for each layer lf" (Is the final 'f' correct?) - Search "Input Layer Processing" probably should be bold and end with a colon. The same goes for the next two points in the list. - Search "approximately 1,875": why "approximately"? the calculation is exact! - Search "in the layer above it." in the text the layers are represented with a horizontal trend from left to right. "above" is strange, I suggest the "previous". - Search "Figure 3.17." remove last dot
GiteaMirror added the area: book label 2026-04-11 07:51:39 -05:00
GiteaMirror commented 2026-04-11 07:51:42 -05:00
Author
Owner
Copy Link

@profvjreddi commented on GitHub (Dec 29, 2024):

Thank you so much, @BravoBaldo, for reviewing the updated chapter.

I really appreciate your thoughtful suggestions—they make the fixes so much easier. Working on long sections can be tedious, especially while juggling the book throughout the day, so your quick and helpful feedback means a lot.

Would you mind taking a look at the new Chapter 4 as well?

<!-- gh-comment-id:2564749352 --> @profvjreddi commented on GitHub (Dec 29, 2024): Thank you so much, @BravoBaldo, for reviewing the updated chapter. I really appreciate your thoughtful suggestions—they make the fixes so much easier. Working on long sections can be tedious, especially while juggling the book throughout the day, so your quick and helpful feedback means a lot. Would you mind taking a look at the new Chapter 4 as well?
Sign in to join this conversation.
No Branch/Tag Specified
Branches Tags
Labels
Clear labels
area: book
area: collabs
area: kits
area: socratiq
area: tinytorch
area: tools
area: website
bug
dependencies
format: epub
format: pdf
link-health
link-rot
priority-high
pull-request
Mirrored from GitHub Pull Request
 staffml
type: bug
type: citation
type: code
type: errata
type: improvement
type: new
type: question
vault-sli
No Label area: book
Milestone
No items
No Milestone
Projects
Clear projects
No project
Assignees
Clear assignees
GiteaMirror ninjasurge
No Assignees
1 Participants
Notifications
Due Date
No due date set.
Dependencies

No dependencies set.

Reference: github-starred/cs249r_book#1491
Delete Branch "%!s()"

Deleting a branch is permanent. Although the deleted branch may continue to exist for a short time before it actually gets removed, it CANNOT be undone in most cases. Continue?