[GH-ISSUE #412] Student Feedback - Chapter 20 #1415

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Originally created by @jasonjabbour on GitHub (Aug 27, 2024).
Original GitHub issue: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/412

Originally assigned to: @jasonjabbour on GitHub.

Chapter 20 - Conclusion

  • This is a harder chapter for me to comment on given that it's up to Vijay's discretion how much he wants to recap the book. I also think that we're going to have to rewrite the conclusion anyways once we've edited all the other chapters, as this is a reflection of what we choose to include/emphasize in each.
  • The verb tense changed every other sentence in this chapter -- I would probably opt for staying in past tense, but it doesn't really matter which tense we choose so long as it's consistent.
  • I feel like you can probably cut down to having only three or four sentences overviewing each chapter. Alternatively, this could be a great place to include a graph, where you highlight one takeaway for each chapter (which could manage to minimize a lot of text).
    Chapter 20 - Conclusion .pdf

Originally posted by @sgiannuzzi39 in https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/discussions/256#discussioncomment-10151566

Originally created by @jasonjabbour on GitHub (Aug 27, 2024). Original GitHub issue: https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/issues/412 Originally assigned to: @jasonjabbour on GitHub. **Chapter 20 - Conclusion** - This is a harder chapter for me to comment on given that it's up to Vijay's discretion how much he wants to recap the book. I also think that we're going to have to rewrite the conclusion anyways once we've edited all the other chapters, as this is a reflection of what we choose to include/emphasize in each. - The verb tense changed every other sentence in this chapter -- I would probably opt for staying in past tense, but it doesn't really matter which tense we choose so long as it's consistent. - I feel like you can probably cut down to having only three or four sentences overviewing each chapter. Alternatively, this could be a great place to include a graph, where you highlight one takeaway for each chapter (which could manage to minimize a lot of text). [Chapter 20 - Conclusion .pdf](https://github.com/user-attachments/files/16381509/Chapter.20.-.Conclusion.pdf) _Originally posted by @sgiannuzzi39 in https://github.com/harvard-edge/cs249r_book/discussions/256#discussioncomment-10151566_
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